You really weave in the actual show stuff well, without making it feel redundant or old.

Thanks so much! It's really hard to use the direct material from the show without *overusing* it. I was worried about that; I'm glad you thought I didn't quote Joss too much.

I was gonna go to bed, but then I saw you had part two up...

I thought I saw the light was still on in the slash closet. *snicker*