Every single beta I have had has had to chide me on POV issues. Either switching POV or being so slavish to POV that the non-POV characters come off as ciphers.
POV changes are like...stripes! It's exciting and colorful as long as you weave in the ends when you change color, and it isn't just that you ran out of Petal Pink partway through because you didn't measure.
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Every single beta I have had has had to chide me on POV issues. Either switching POV or being so slavish to POV that the non-POV characters come off as ciphers.
And they say the MOON is a harsh mistress. LOL
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