I was confused and intrigued that there was so much stuff about Sheppard at the beginning, and then Parrish showed up, and I was wondering if maybe you'd accidentally mislabeled this (Lorne/Ronon instead of Lorne/is doing everyone omg). But I didn't mind at all because I was enjoying the flow of it, and liked that Lorne was able to use his skills for stuff like drawing flowers (and also, how cool is your idea that the plant life was so delicate that it couldn't be photographed? very cool, that's how cool).
And then! Ronon! And Lorne watching him! Hanging out together! Then sex (due to Ronon's cunning plan!). It all came together!
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winterfish
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Date: 2007-07-27 09:25 pm (UTC)I was confused and intrigued that there was so much stuff about Sheppard at the beginning, and then Parrish showed up, and I was wondering if maybe you'd accidentally mislabeled this (Lorne/Ronon instead of Lorne/is doing everyone omg). But I didn't mind at all because I was enjoying the flow of it, and liked that Lorne was able to use his skills for stuff like drawing flowers (and also, how cool is your idea that the plant life was so delicate that it couldn't be photographed? very cool, that's how cool).
And then! Ronon! And Lorne watching him! Hanging out together! Then sex (due to Ronon's cunning plan!). It all came together!
In conclusion - Glee! And thank you! And awesome!