Awesome! I like the slow build-up, and the way Rodney tries to ground himself, even through the crazy spin of the things that happen in the Pegasus Galaxy. Also, I really love the idea of Ronon/Rodney in general - man, they have so much hot potential (and snark potential!).
I have one tiny nit - 'junior year' - this isn't something that we say up here (at least, I've only ever heard it on American TV). In fact, I'm not even sure what year that means. We usually say grade ten or grade eleven or something. And, if you want to figure Rodney went to high school in Ontario (I have no idea what the consensus on this is), high school would have gone to grade 13.
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Date: 2007-08-29 12:15 am (UTC)I have one tiny nit - 'junior year' - this isn't something that we say up here (at least, I've only ever heard it on American TV). In fact, I'm not even sure what year that means. We usually say grade ten or grade eleven or something. And, if you want to figure Rodney went to high school in Ontario (I have no idea what the consensus on this is), high school would have gone to grade 13.