Nicely done, with such gorgeous descriptions throughout. Great look at all three Winchesters.
Favorite lines:
When he wakes, he sees the room washed over in green and red, like he’s looked too long at the edges of the sun.
Great description.
He and Ellen sit on the back porch, Dean twisting the lid off El Sol after El Sol with the hem of his T-shirt.
I really like that detail about his T-shirt hem.
Dean’s love is like a pilot light, an unwavering blue flame that illuminates him, that drives him. This boy of his is all edges, broken places and sharp corners that hurt John to see.
Lovely, aching description.
Much of Sam is shadowed, the deep purple and green of slow-healing bruises.
Ooh, nice turn of phrase.
When he wrestles that demon to the ground, for once John is not thinking of Mary—his beautiful bride, her twice swollen belly, her body overcome in flame—but only of his sons, of Sam and of Dean.
Love this, that’s John’s final actions are more about love than vengeance. Nice.
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Date: 2007-05-22 10:59 pm (UTC)Favorite lines:
When he wakes, he sees the room washed over in green and red, like he’s looked too long at the edges of the sun.
Great description.
He and Ellen sit on the back porch, Dean twisting the lid off El Sol after El Sol with the hem of his T-shirt.
I really like that detail about his T-shirt hem.
Dean’s love is like a pilot light, an unwavering blue flame that illuminates him, that drives him. This boy of his is all edges, broken places and sharp corners that hurt John to see.
Lovely, aching description.
Much of Sam is shadowed, the deep purple and green of slow-healing bruises.
Ooh, nice turn of phrase.
When he wrestles that demon to the ground, for once John is not thinking of Mary—his beautiful bride, her twice swollen belly, her body overcome in flame—but only of his sons, of Sam and of Dean.
Love this, that’s John’s final actions are more about love than vengeance. Nice.