lunabee34: (sga: ronon by stargater_gal)
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This meanders all over the place like it wants to make Lorne a big ole slut but can’t quite manage it and it’s sort of a Christmas fic and I don’t have a handle on these characters AT ALL and I made up alien words and what is wrong with me? Save me from myself, y’all. *flails and hides*

Title: Artistry
Pairing: Lorne/Ronon
Rating: Adult
Vague second season spoilers
1600 words

This is for [livejournal.com profile] ana_grrl because she is made of shiny awesomeness.




Few people on Atlantis know that Evan can draw. He doesn’t hide his talent, exactly; he just keeps it close to the vest, not quite private but not common knowledge either. If he’s honest with himself, Evan will admit he stays quiet because he likes to see that look on peoples’ faces—that moment of happy astonishment when they realize what he can make, what his hands can do.

Regardless, he has little time for art when he first arrives in Atlantis. He’s too busy learning how to navigate this galaxy that’s full of both the most beautiful and the most terrifying wonders he’s ever seen. Then Evan’s first Pegasus Christmas rolls around. Everybody who lives in the city (and a surprising number of Athosians and Daedalus crew) puts his name in Dr. McKay’s metaphorical and computerized hat and the next morning, Evan opens an email with the subject line Secret Santa to find Colonel Sheppard’s name.

Evan’s a little at a loss. Buying your CO a Christmas gift is a daunting task under the best conditions, but Dr. Weir’s imposed a twenty five dollar spending limit (or the equivalent of one half bushel of grangal beans for the Athosians) and Evan only has two days to decide on a gift before the weekly data burst to Earth. They’ve all got more money than most of them believe they’ll ever get to spend so why Dr. Weir insists on the skinflint approach to the holidays Evan doesn’t know, unless it’s to keep the Athosians from feeling like their gifts aren’t on par and Evan guesses that makes sense. But Evan can’t think of a single thing Colonel Sheppard might want that only costs twenty five dollars. He thinks for two days solid and then remembers that his grandmother always said that the best gifts are handmade. Evan really hopes Colonel Sheppard agrees with her.

When Evan decides to do a thing, he does it right. He takes pictures of the city from the pier at sunrise and at sunset and when the noonday sun is almost blinding on the breakers. He even snaps some aerial shots from the jumper, Teyla watching him curiously but saying nothing. Then Evan paints.

On Christmas Eve, the mess is completely transformed. Dr. Zelenka figured out how to work Atlantis’s internal radio system, so there’s music and people are dancing. Halling brought a tree from the mainland and someone (Evan suspects Lt. Cadman) has decorated it with dozens of blown up surgical gloves and tinsel crafted from yellow caution tape. Dr. McKay made a surprisingly un-narcissistic slide show that chronicles their time so far in Atlantis, and it plays on laptops left at strategic intervals throughout the room. The Daedalus transported a few cases of liquor along with everyone’s gifts and the punch is flowing freely. Evan can’t remember the last time his colleagues looked so relaxed.

Evan receives a wooden tray from an Athosian man he’s never met. The color of the wood is shocking—sepias and burnt umbers and the most startling orange. The grain is studded with large whorls, and although simple in design, the tray’s surface has been polished until it feels as soft as silk against Evan’s fingertips. Evan knows the work of a master craftsman when he sees it and he also knows that this gift he’s been given is worth much more than twenty five dollars. The Athosian greeting has always made Evan slightly uncomfortable but he doesn’t know any other way to communicate his gratitude, so he pulls the man’s forehead down to his own.

Colonel Sheppard gives Dr. Heightmeyer an indigo glass vase from M4X-143 and then Evan hands the Colonel his gift. Colonel Sheppard peels back the paper and stands transfixed, jaw dropped, until Dr. McKay stamps his foot impatiently and says, “Well? Don’t keep us in suspense.” Colonel Sheppard turns the painting so that everyone can see, the fingers of his left hand poised over Atlantis’s luminescent spires.

“Major Lorne,” he says. “Evan,” he says. “You made this?” And then Colonel Sheppard looks at him the way he looks at the sky, the way he looks at the city herself and Evan blushes, pleased. After that, the cat’s pretty much out of the bag as far as Evan’s artistic ability is concerned.

Evan’s always enjoyed going offworld with Dr. Parrish, but he enjoys it even more now that Dr. Parrish wants his help cataloguing the native flora they discover. The first time Dr. Parrish asks, they are on a world where the plant life is so delicate that exposure to any technological device that runs on batteries is harmful. After destroying an acre or two of wildflowers with the digital camera, Dr. Parrish asks Evan to draw the plants he singles out and Evan does. After that, whenever he accompanies Dr. Parrish offworld, Dr. Parrish asks Evan to draw, even when his drawings aren’t necessary.

Evan finds these missions relaxing—the scratch of pencil on paper, the sun browning his arms and his neck as he works, Dr. Parrish muttering under his breath and pressing leaves between sheets of plastic. After one such mission, Ronon corners Evan in the gym.

“I saw what you gave Sheppard at Christmas,” he says. “You’re eritaya.”

“What?” Evan says, confused. He’s not sure, but he thinks Ronon just insulted him and after watching Ronon beat the crap out of more Marines than he can count, he is sure that he doesn’t want to be on Ronon’s bad side. Ever.

Eritaya. Artist. One who lays the heart bare.” Ronon looks grave when he says this, as if he is reciting something sacred from memory.

“Um, okay,” Evan says. This is rapidly becoming the most bizarre conversation he’s had since he suffered through Dr. Beckett and Dr. McKay’s discussion of the foods they like that most other people find utterly revolting.

Ronon says, “I want a new tattoo and I want you to draw it for me.”

Evan nods, relieved. Now things are making a little more sense. “Just tell me what you want and I’ll be happy to sketch it out for you.”

Ronon scowls. “No, no. That’s not the way it’s done. You watch me, the way you watched Sheppard and then you’ll know what to draw.”

Evan almost says, “You’ve got it all wrong. I don’t watch Colonel Sheppard. I have never watched Colonel Sheppard. The hard on that man has for Atlantis is visible from the Milky Way,” but then he gets it, what Ronon means, and he doesn’t know why but Evan agrees.

So for the next three months, Evan watches Ronon Dex. He watches Ronon spar, the long span of his torso beading over with sweat, the animal grace of his limbs as they flex and curl with fierce precision. He watches Ronon eat, always cleaning his plate as if he can’t completely shake the hunger of the last seven years. Evan watches him laugh, watches him cuff Dr. McKay on the side of the head, watches him carry an unconscious Teyla through the Gate and run her to the infirmary with his braids flying behind him.

The days pass and Evan has absolutely no idea what to draw for Ronon but another thing has become abundantly clear. At some point, Evan realizes that he has stopped watching Ronon and started watching Ronon. This problem is compounded by the fact that ever since that day in the gym, Ronon’s been spending as much of his off-duty time with Evan as he does with his team.

Like now. Ronon is kicking Evan’s ass at Mortal Kombat Annihilation, the controller dwarfed by his huge hands. Evan throws his controller down in disgust and they drink beer (Sam Adams, black market acquisition) in companionable silence for awhile. Evan likes that about Ronon, the way he’s not afraid to let a silence stretch.

In the quiet, Evan can focus on the way Ronon’s throat works when he swallows, the heat that soaks into him where their knees casually touch. Then Ronon does something entirely unexpected. He plucks Evan’s beer from his hand and sets it on the floor and then he kisses him—sweetly, tenderly, not at all the way Evan thought Ronon would kiss. Ronon drags his mouth down Evan’s neck to his collarbone, his beard scraping a heated line into Evan’s flesh and Evan’s breath comes faster and catches in his throat.

“Been wanting to do that for a long time,” Ronon says, sliding his hands under Evan’s worn T-shirt.

“Wait,” Evan says. “Is that what this whole tattoo thing was about? You hitting on me?”

Ronon laughs. “Yeah.”

“Oh, thank god, because I have no idea what to draw for you.”

“There are other ways to lay the heart bare than with ink.” And then Ronon unzips Evan’s pants and pushes them down to his knees and his mouth is so hot and perfect on Evan’s cock that the whole world falls away except for that wet suction and the pleasure building in his body. Evan comes and Ronon swallows him down and when they kiss Evan tastes himself.

Ronon slicks up his cock and presses Evan down into the floor and Evan doesn’t question this turn of events in the least. After all, he’s been watching Ronon for months now and he knows what he wants. Ronon makes the most filthy, delicious noises when he fucks him, wet gasps and broken moans, and when he comes, he pants out words in Satedan that Evan can decipher from their tone.

Later, when they are folded into a bed that’s much too small for them both, Evan traces lazy circles on Ronon’s hip. He’s starting to get some ideas now and he has the feeling it won’t be long before he knows exactly what belongs on the canvas of Ronon’s skin.

Date: 2007-07-27 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelliem.livejournal.com
Guh.

Well done.

Date: 2007-07-27 03:38 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

*big grin*

Date: 2007-07-27 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inkscribe.livejournal.com
Beautiful ... love it! Love the experience of developing the artwork and Ronon's subtle pulling of Evan into his world. Thank you! :-D

Date: 2007-07-27 03:38 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: weir by frosted magnolia)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you! :) I had fun with this one.

*glee*

Date: 2007-07-27 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dirty-smudge.livejournal.com
I like the fact that as soon as he reveals his awesomeness, John starts calling him by his first name.

Date: 2007-07-27 03:39 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: carson by stargate fangirl)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Heeeee. Me too.

Thank you!

:)

Date: 2007-07-27 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trishabooms.livejournal.com
Really enjoyable, thank you.

Date: 2007-07-27 04:28 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: atlantis red by killer mocha)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Oh, your icon!

*loves*

Thanks for reading. :)

Date: 2007-07-27 06:21 pm (UTC)
ext_1890: (Default)
From: [identity profile] svmadelyn.livejournal.com
Mmmm. *Fantastic.*

Date: 2007-07-27 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reefgirluk.livejournal.com
That was something else, great story

Date: 2007-07-27 11:35 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

Date: 2007-07-27 09:05 pm (UTC)
lyr: (Rodneywow: maryavatar)
From: [personal profile] lyr
I like the ending paragraph the best; it's satisfying and gently hopeful. It's also cool that Ronon has this whole gentler, thinkier side than we usually get to see. Nice work!

Date: 2007-07-27 11:39 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Heeeeee. This was weird to write as I haven't seen season 3 and I don't feel like I have a handle on these characters at all. But fun. LOL

I'm glad it worked for you. :)

Oh, BTW, did you get "Mystery of Proud Typewriter" for beta? No rush or anything, I just wanna be sure the email made it to ya. :)

Date: 2007-07-28 12:31 am (UTC)
lyr: (Goddess: lanning)
From: [personal profile] lyr
Yep, I got it! I'll get it back to you soon.

Date: 2007-07-28 03:11 am (UTC)
ext_2351: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Yay! And thank you! Don't hurry or anything. We've got some time before it's due (although I am going out of town Tuesday afternoon, so any time before then is great). You are a doll to help me with this.

Date: 2007-07-27 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeep!

I was confused and intrigued that there was so much stuff about Sheppard at the beginning, and then Parrish showed up, and I was wondering if maybe you'd accidentally mislabeled this (Lorne/Ronon instead of Lorne/is doing everyone omg). But I didn't mind at all because I was enjoying the flow of it, and liked that Lorne was able to use his skills for stuff like drawing flowers (and also, how cool is your idea that the plant life was so delicate that it couldn't be photographed? very cool, that's how cool).

And then! Ronon! And Lorne watching him! Hanging out together! Then sex (due to Ronon's cunning plan!). It all came together!

In conclusion - Glee! And thank you! And awesome!

Date: 2007-07-27 11:38 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: john by le_mot_mo)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
I was wondering if maybe you'd accidentally mislabeled this (Lorne/Ronon instead of Lorne/is doing everyone omg)

I know! This fic very much wanted Lorne to be sexing it up with all of Atlantis. I create subtext within my own work! Ahahahahahahahha. Ahem.

Your feedback makes me happy. It makes me do a happy dance of happiness. And also smile. Happily.

God I love it when Ronon has cunning plans.

Thank you, muchly Ana. I'm glad you like it. It was practice for the Lorne Porn of Epic Proportions that's in the works. LOL

Date: 2007-07-28 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com
It was practice for the Lorne Porn of Epic Proportions that's in the works. LOL

What? What's this? Are you trying to make me run around with glee??

Date: 2007-07-29 06:51 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: john by le_mot_mo)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
I am always trying to make you run around with glee.

It's true.

Date: 2007-07-29 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com
ARGH! MY KNEE!

...say, would you have time to beta Firefly fic? It's about 2500 words long, and might be a bit creepy.

Date: 2007-07-29 09:08 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Yes, yes I would. Send it on. :)

(Oh, just a heads up. I'm going out of town for pretty much the whole week next week, so I'm going to post my entry for your ficathon a little early, if that's not a huge faux pas; I would appreciate it if you could add it to the masterlist post when you get it up)

:)

Date: 2007-07-29 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com
so I'm going to post my entry for your ficathon a little early

Yep! No problem.

The beta I'm asking about is for the same ficathon - do you have time to beta it before you leave?

Date: 2007-07-29 10:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Oh yes. I'm not leaving for a couple days yet. :)

Date: 2007-07-29 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com
Sweet! I'll send it to your yahoo address now. Thank you!

Date: 2007-07-28 04:48 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (mcshep_otp_ailurophile6)
From: [personal profile] spikedluv
Oh, that was wonderful! “There are other ways to lay the heart bare than with ink.” Ronon, you sneaky, clever man!

Date: 2007-07-29 09:06 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: ronon by stargater_gal)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I love the idea of Ronon going to these elaborate lengths to get in Lorne's pants. LOL

Date: 2007-07-29 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adannu.livejournal.com
Oh, I like this a lot. Evan watching Sheppard (and the line about him having a hard-on for Atlantis that can be seen from the Milky Way is -- yes, awesome indeed) -- and him learning to see Ronon... mmm.

Date: 2007-07-29 09:09 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: carson by stargate fangirl)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Yay!

I'm so glad you liked this.

*dances*

Date: 2007-07-29 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] infinimato.livejournal.com
Um Um Um Um


YUUMMMM.

Also, I love the way

And then Colonel Sheppard looks at him the way he looks at the sky, the way he looks at the city herself

goes so perfectly with

I don’t watch Colonel Sheppard. I have never watched Colonel Sheppard. The hard on that man has for Atlantis is visible from the Milky Way

Hee.

Date: 2007-07-29 09:10 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: atlantis red by killer mocha)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
*glee*

Thanks so much for the awesome feedback! I'm so glad you liked this.

*big grin*

Date: 2007-07-29 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caelent.livejournal.com
Awesome, very very awesome.

Date: 2007-07-29 10:58 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: john by le_mot_mo)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!
*bounce*

:)

Date: 2007-11-14 11:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com
Wow! That is lovely and hot, and just... I've been craving Ronon/Lorne since Tabula Rasa and I wanted something to do with Lorne's painting because I like to think he painted the picture in Ronon's room, and this was just amazingly perfect in every way.

Date: 2007-11-14 05:45 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you!

:)

*beams*

I also think that Lorne painted Ronon's hideously gaudy exquisite tableau of bravery. LOL Somebody needs to write that fic. :)

Date: 2008-04-01 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Lorne fic... yay! [whimpers happily]

I'm sure there's more out there and I'm not looking hard enough, but when I find it, it makes me so happy.

I actually love the fact that this story didn't dive straight to Lorne/Ronon and you re-introduced Lorne to us with incredible charm, gave us a glimpse of how others see him and I love how it all starts with Christmas. I love the sense of community in there and stories that give us that. It reinforces these people as real, more team, more networking, more Lorne and Ronon! So in character! I adore it! :D

Date: 2008-04-01 12:51 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: lorne gun b/w by drkcherry)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
OH, wow. Thank you so much. I am so glad that my meandering and unfocused beginning worked for you LOL I just like Lorne so much that I wanted to write about him interacting with *everybody* and couldn't make myself choose. And I am a sucker for Christmas fic. Like, I think I have a problem in that arena. *g*

Thank you for such lovely feedback. I appreciate you letting me know that you liked this.

Date: 2008-08-14 03:41 am (UTC)
ariadne83: cropped from official schematics (Default)
From: [personal profile] ariadne83
Oh that is just... Yes. Thank you.

Date: 2008-08-14 03:44 am (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: ronon far away by grudgepuff)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Oh yay! I am so glad this hit the spot for you.

*beams*

Date: 2008-09-30 09:59 am (UTC)
ext_3521: (Default)
From: [identity profile] chris-king-2005.livejournal.com
Okay, so I'm more than a year behind... but I just discovered SGA, and I have a fondness for rare pairings.

This? Was gorgeous.

Date: 2008-09-30 11:39 am (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: rodney profile grin by mona)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you found this and liked it.

*grin*

I do alot of reccing on my journal, so if you check my tags for recs: sga, you'll find some additional rare pairings recced there.

Date: 2009-04-22 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] willow-fae-20.livejournal.com
Found this through an odd set of circumstances: Was looking for *something* to read and Googled 'McKay/Sheppard fic' which linked me to the Crossroads index. There I found the 'rare pairings' section and there 'Dex/Lorne', thus finding your story.

All that aside I really really liked this. And would love to know what Evan finally decided was the proper tattoo for Ronon. Also, have you written any more for this pairing? 'Cause I adore your take on them and their 'voices'.

Date: 2009-04-23 12:04 am (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: lorne closeup by scifijunkie)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Fandom is so random sometimes, isn't it? *g*

I am so glad you found this fic and even gladder (is that a word) that you took the time to tell me. Thank you!

I have not written any other Lorne/Ronon, but I have written them both in other pairings. Here's my fanfic masterlist if you're interested:

http://lunabee34.livejournal.com/106961.html

Date: 2010-02-16 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sue-duck.livejournal.com
Oh. Wow. I have no idea what to say. That was amazing.

And the SEX. Wow.

Date: 2010-02-17 12:48 pm (UTC)
ext_2351: (star trek 09: llap hands by awakencordy)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback.

*beams*

Date: 2011-01-19 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cocokitti.livejournal.com
I wish it wasn't over :(

Ronon& Lorne are my favorite <3 It was nice to find something I haven't read!

Date: 2011-01-20 02:08 am (UTC)
ext_2351: (sga: ronon hand on eye by mona)
From: [identity profile] lunabee34.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed this!!

*beams*

Date: 2022-08-05 01:55 am (UTC)
anagrrl: (Lorne Looks Up)
From: [personal profile] anagrrl
Just re-read this, and I still love it. It's fantastic (and hot), and the details - like the texture of the wooden tray, or the delicate field of flowers - are lush.

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