Date: 2008-05-29 09:12 am (UTC)
lyr: (Silenced Dean: lostmemento)
From: [personal profile] lyr
I like the way you depicted Hell here; it's such a gnawing weight of desolate, eroding despair. I like that there's no sense of rhyme or reason or time, and absolutely no one comes---because if there's something scarier than something awful coming after you, it might be finding yourself suffering alone with nothing at all coming after you. I think the tie-in to the ghost story from Dean's childhood is a good touch, too. And I totally love that Ruby comes to the rescue at last as Sam's emissary. I can so see Sam holding the backdoor open and sending her in!
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