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Date: 2007-03-12 04:25 am (UTC)Maybe that's my problem with it. I'm trying to give everybody equal screen time, so to speak, when that's not really an issue.
Unless it were a highly stylized POV presentation, I suspect I wouldn't notice slip from 3rd-limited to 3rd-omni.
That's my take as well, and yet in my own writing, it's probably the major thing that worries me, even more than voice and the everpresent lure of Purple Prose. LOL
I think because I'm using to engaging with the source texts which are obviously told in some variety of 3rd person
I think that's another dimension of my discomfort as well.